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| Let me carefully compare the original Hebrew against my translation section by section.The original Hebrew has several elements I need to check carefully. Let me go through each section:
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| **Things I confirm were missed or handled imperfectly:**
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| 1. **The images** — The original has three image files with captions. Per editorial standards, images are retained with translated English captions. I omitted them entirely.
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| 2. **The disambiguation note at the top** — The original opens with a hatnote ({{פירוש נוסף}}) pointing to another article about a different person with a similar name. I omitted this.
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| 3. **The gravestone inscription box** — The original has a formatted sidebar box ({{חלונית}}) displaying the exact text of the gravestone inscription. I translated the content but did not reproduce it in a formatted box.
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| 4. **The "Further Reading" entry** — I translated it, but the original uses a specific Hebrew template ({{כפר}}) for a ''Kfar Chabad Magazine'' article. I rendered it as a plain bullet rather than properly formatted.
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| 5. **The {{שכתוב}} cleanup tag** on the transfer section — This is an internal Hebrew Wikipedia maintenance tag and should simply be dropped in the English version, which I correctly did.
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| 6. **The family tree template at the bottom** ({{בית רבי/אדמו"ר המהר"ש}}) — This is a navigation template. It has no equivalent on the English Chabadpedia and can be omitted.
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| Here is the corrected and complete entry:
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| ```mediawiki
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| {{about|the son of the Rebbe Maharash|the seventh Rebbe of Chabad|Menachem Mendel Schneerson}} | | {{about|the son of the Rebbe Maharash|the seventh Rebbe of Chabad|Menachem Mendel Schneerson}} |
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| * [http://www.teshura.com/teshurapdf/תולדות%20הרמ'מ-Melul%20-%20BM%20iyar%2018%2C%205779%20.pdf A Biography of Rabbi Menachem Mendel, the Youngest Son of the Rebbe Maharash] — Yosef Yitzchak Melul; commemorative booklet from the ''upsherin'' (the traditional first haircut of a Jewish boy at age three) of Menachem Mendel Melul, Brooklyn, 5779 (2019). | | * [http://www.teshura.com/teshurapdf/תולדות%20הרמ'מ-Melul%20-%20BM%20iyar%2018%2C%205779%20.pdf A Biography of Rabbi Menachem Mendel, the Youngest Son of the Rebbe Maharash] — Yosef Yitzchak Melul; commemorative booklet from the ''upsherin'' (the traditional first haircut of a Jewish boy at age three) of Menachem Mendel Melul, Brooklyn, 5779 (2019). |
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| [[Category:5627 births]]
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| [[he:מנחם מענדל שניאורסון (בן אדמו"ר המהר"ש)]] | | [[he:מנחם מענדל שניאורסון (בן אדמו"ר המהר"ש)]] |